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Monday

This week we are writing a description.

Watch this video, how does this link to our topic (Time Travellers)?

Read through the Modelled Version and complete the Planning Sheet.

The Piano by Aidan Gibbons

Tuesday

Looking at your Plan and Modelled Version, begin to write your first paragraph. 

Focus on describing the room and emotion at the beginning of the video. Use fronted adverbials and prepositions.

Instead of Widgit this week, use the Group 2 Checklist and Writing Sheet to help with your writing.

 

Wednesday

Write your second paragraph. This is about when he sees his wife who has passed away. How can you show the change in mood with the description?

Instead of Widgit this week, use the Group 2 Checklist and Writing Sheet to help with your writing.

 

Thursday

Write your third paragraph? This is about his flashbacks to fighting in the war. How can you explain how he is feeling using figurative language?

Instead of Widgit this week, use the Group 2 Checklist and Writing Sheet to help with your writing.

 

Friday

Complete your description by writing your final paragraph. This is about his childhood flashbacks and then his grandson. How has the mood changed from the beginning of the text to the end?

Instead of Widgit this week, use the Group 2 Checklist and Writing Sheet to help with your writing.

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